Quite the journey the script has taken(: I love the new rhythm. I feel like it's a lot more natural and fluid. The first discussion we had over the script, there was question as to the girls being believable as high schoolers... I feel there is no room for doubt now!
On the new re-write, PAGE 2 - a new line has been added for Anne- "... of course not, high schoolers don't get pregnant..." Her intention with this line is unclear to me. Anne is trying to get Corrine to like her, Corrine (according to the character description) has already had sex and is reassuring herself that she's not pregnant with line "...no, no, it can't be". Is Anne creating more of a distance between Corrine & herself becoming friends with this new line?
I receive a text and am able to make it at 1:pm on Tuesday so we can rehearse the new script. Thank you ladies :)